The novelist in early winter
I just finished reading my friend Lee Polevoi’s first novel,
“The Moon in Deep Winter.”
It’s a darkly comic tale of domestic treachery, set in snowy and frigid New England. Having done a good amount of reading and writing and some ice fishing myself, I can tell you that Lee has an eye for detail and the requisite “intoxication with language,” as Jim Harrison put it, to make this a book worth reading.
And given that it’s wintry outside and the moon will be full tonight, it’s the perfect time to check in with Lee on the habits of the craft of fiction writing, his thoughts on the state of publishing, and who he’d like to play the lead should this title ever make the big screen…
Q: Lee, how do you conduct your research? You’ve included some snippets of interesting knowledge on a number of far-flung topics and places (the mechanics of flight, an island in the South Pacific, Mexico City, etc.). Do you look these places up, or prefer to go there and experience them in person?
For the unwary writer, research can be a seductive trap. While researching various topics for inclusion in my novel, I had to be careful not to spend too much time looking things up and less time actually writing. Back in the day, I spent long hours in the library finding what I needed. In present time, I’ve become adept at hunting down what I need online, while doing my best to steer free of “quirky” sites and time-wasting chat rooms.
The key in research is to find the right one or two key details, which lend verisimilitude to the fiction, without overwhelming the reader with random facts and/or appearing to be little more than regurgitated research. As to “experiencing places in person”—yes, whenever possible, I like to go there (I attended college in New England, the setting for The Moon in Deep Winter) but when that’s not possible, again I seek out those details that add mood and atmosphere to the story’s setting.
Q: What’s your writing routine like? When is the best time for you to write? How long do you typically work per day?
An ideal writing day for me starts with a vigorous two-hour session of tennis. Nothing clears the head like exercise. When I sit down to re-immerse myself in the fictional world I’m creating, I want to be as clear of external “noise” as possible. Generally I’m good for 3-4 hours of solid work, though that might include moments where I wander from the desk to refill my coffee, check a passage in another book, etc. And whenever possible I try to end a session where I’ve got a clear idea where to pick up the next day.
Q: You are among the most well-read people I know. Do you have a favorite author, genre or book?
I would point to a number of novels that I regard as classics of contemporary fiction:
- Ninety-two in the Shade by Thomas McGuane
- Dog Soldiers by Robert Stone
- Lolita by Vladimir Nabokov
- Already Dead by Denis Johnson
- The View from Castle Rock by Alice Munro
- The Untouchable by John Banville
- The True History of the Kelly Gang by Peter Carey
- Moon Tiger by Penelope Lively
- The Road by Cormac McCarthy
The list could go on from here, but these novels share several elements: a compelling voice (first- or third-person), evocative setting and strong narrative flow. Style may not be everything, but when you have the rich expanse of the English language as your tool, why not go for broke?
Q: Newspapers are dying, and instead of bound books, people are carrying iPods, iPhones, BlackBerries, etc. Are we witnessing the beginning of the end of book-reading?
Increasingly, it seems, the publishing industry appears to be living on borrowed time. While I don’t believe anything can replace the physical presence of a book, the industry business model seems untenable in our day and age. The vast majority of books sold and read come from a tiny fraction of “brand-name” authors, a situation that does nothing to nourish the careers of writers who sell only a few thousand copies. And, as your question suggests, the platform for reading is moving inexorably to some electronic pastiche of word and image that’s not necessarily linear or concerned with “making sense” in the conventional, 20th century way. I think books will be around for awhile but I’m very concerned with the number of adults who aren’t very interested in the written word or who think reading a novel is “work.”
Q: The book seemed to have a cinematic quality at times. Do you consciously try to write that way?
As a past recipient of a Chesterfield Project Film Writers’ Project screenwriting fellowship, I spent a year at Amblin Entertainment (housed at Universal Studios) writing screenplays and learning the fine art of pitching stories to industry executives. Like my fellow fiction-writers in the program this was altogether a new and eye-opening experience. Screenplays, unlike novels, must adhere to a fairly rigid format (three-act structure, specific number of pages, etc.) and working within this format taught me a great deal about set-up and pay-off, the value of using images to move a story forward and, of course, interesting dialogue. All of this knowledge informed the making of The Moon in Deep Winter, which I determined early on was the type of story that depended on vivid imagery and a propulsive narrative for its hoped-for success.
Q: OK, put on your director’s hat. If you could cast Parker Sloane, is there an actor out there you like for the part?
My first choice would be a young actor, Joseph Gordon-Levitt, who was riveting in the 2007 indie film, “The Lookout.”
Lee Polevoi’s debut novel, The Moon in Deep Winter, is published by Casagrande Press. Learn more at www.moonindeep.com.

Good interview. Interesting reading list. I thought 92 in the Shade was a great book when I first read it in the late ’70s–I even taught it–but I do not think it has aged well with time. I would like to read Dog Soldiers again, as I was also really impressed when I first read it; I would like to think it would hold up. I might check out the Denis Johnson book he referenced; I am enjoying his Tree of Smoke. I can think of better McCarthy novels, including Blood Meridian and The Crossing and even Cities of the Plains. I am embarrassed that I have not read Carey, Munro, and Lively. I hope to get around to them someday. How could Bellow, Roth, William Vollmann, Richard Powers, or William Boyd be left off any such list? That’s what makes these kinds of lists interesting for debate.
I agree with “Dog Soldiers,” and in that vein, Mailer’s “The Naked and the Dead,” both of which delivered the horrors of war in a believable way. I’ve read some Roth, I liked “The Plot Against America” and some Bellow, but the thought of it now seems like work ;->
The following also made an impression on me when I read them:
The World According to Garp, by John Irving
The Loneliness of the Long Distance Runner, by Alan Sillitoe
The Sun Also Rises, by Ernest Hemingway
A Good Day to Die, by Jim Harrison
Catch 22, by Joseph Heller
Something Happened, by Joseph Heller
More recently, I really loved “City of Theives” by David Benioff. It’s set in St. Petersburg during the seige of that city by the Nazis and it’s a really terrific piece of story-telling.
And thanks to Lee I found the novels of Alan Furst — all set in pre-WWII Europe, they invariably feature a reluctant hero set against an atmosphere of longing and desperation; it’s like reading Casablanca, always a treat.
William Boyd should be on any list of notable authors. I especially enjoyed his last two novels, “Any Human Heart” and “Restless.” The former is presented as a faux-journal spanning many decades in the fictitious author’s life and deftly mimics the change of voice as the “author” grows older and presumably wiser. For the novel I’m writing now, which also takes the form of a fictional memoir of sorts, I’m particularly intrigued with this format. Any suggestions of similarly structured novels?
For me, the mark of a really good novel is when I finish it and find myself still living within its “universe” for the next several hours or days. I also appreciate novels that force me to struggle intellectually against the conclusion or celebrate the profoundity of it – all the while admiring how the author had beautifully developed the elements that got her/him there.
Tim O’Brien, “In the Lake of the Woods” and Yann Martel, “Life of Pi” are two all time favorites because of their endings.
McCarthy is a favorite of mine for the universes he can lead me to, making them feel as if I have always lived there. I’ve read about everything he’s written except for “The Road.” I’m avoiding that one because I have never enjoyed end of the world, fatalistic, doom and gloom settings. The world of the moment has enough of that going on in it already.
If anyone can recommend a really good novel about the future that is more utopian – where we actually come out OK as a human race – I’d love to read it. An English teacher of mine long ago turned me on to Thoreau and B.F. Skinner. I’m longing lately to go back to those roots.
Lee, I look forward to reading “The Moon in Deep Winter.” There are ice shacks outside my window as I type this. The temperature is hovering around 5 degrees farenheit with the wind chill and we have had far greater than average snowfall for the month of December. People lose their minds and domestic violence escalates during the long, light-starved winters of our northern rural existence.